Sunday, February 28, 2016

Students' Blog Entry C

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Advantages and disadvantages of living in jeddah city

Drawbacks of life in a big city: For one thing, there is a serious lack of jobs, especially interesting ones. This is mainly due to the small number of shops and services. Another disadvantage is the lower educational level. Even if there are schools and universities in the city, they are certainly not as good as those in country. Last but not least, entertainment, particularly in the evening is difficult to find, as there are hardly any music clubs, theatres, operas or museums. Therefore living in the country could be very boring, especially for teenagers.

the location always good everything is near and clear the same with the environment

In conclusion, I think that life in big city is not suitable for everybody. It is the best place for elderly people who seek for peace and quiet.

8 comments:

  1. The picture intreeresting but it is not jeddah

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  2. Jeddah,capital letters

    You wrote a good ideas and many things, I like that.
    Good luck!

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  3. Jeddah city does not have the entertainment of music .
    In paragraph 3 you should write *the * capital letter

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  4. There is high educational level in jeddah

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